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by **Pillaroforder** » January 28th, 2009, 4:12 pm

And as "payback" I get to do this.

2009-01-26, panel 3, Sarine's first speech bubble: "Vercian"->"Veracian"

by **mindstalk** » January 30th, 2009, 1:19 am

2009-01-30: relive me -> relieve me. "relive me" sounds cool in the right context but this is not it.

by **Slamlander** » February 12th, 2009, 1:22 am

2009-02-11 Last Panel: "Help me and you have can it." probably needs to read "Help me and you can have it."

by **mindstalk** » February 16th, 2009, 1:31 am

2009-02-16: first panel: the "what? why?" bubble is pointing at Meji, which doesn't seem to make sense. If it's Sarine it should be pointing down (off-panel) or something.

by **KarlBob** » March 11th, 2009, 3:17 am

March 6, 2009. 2nd Panel:
"Why does arriving to a completely empty room fill me with more dread then if the elves were here waiting for us?"
Should be:
"Why does arriving to a completely empty room fill me with more dread than if the elves were here waiting for us?"

Then/Than confusion has become my latest Internet pet peeve.
I ate a bite of ice cream, then smiled.
I'd rather eat vanilla ice cream than chocolate.

by **Graybeard** » April 17th, 2009, 9:43 am

2009-04-17, second panel, Sarna's first bubble: "broadside" should be "broad side". Big difference between a lot of guns firing at once, and a big wall. In the same bubble, "Oh come on Sarine" really should be punctuated "Oh, come on, Sarine" -- but that's minor, and space may not allow it (really don't want the speech bubble to obscure the art).

It's been gratifying to see how few of these there have been this year. Some real work has gone into proofreading the comics before they go up.

by **Pillaroforder** » May 20th, 2009, 1:09 am

2009-04-20: third panel, elven liutenants first speech bubble; "Elanin, can lock down the errant?" -> "Elanin, can you lock down the errant?"

by **Pillaroforder** » June 18th, 2009, 9:53 am

2009-06-18 in bottom left panel Jon and Meji's position is reverse as in the two bottom right panels and no movement is implied.

OK, not a typo but continuity error.

by **Pillaroforder** » June 24th, 2009, 1:21 am

2009-06-24, panel 1, Elven leader's first speech bubble: "you under"->"you are under"

by **kaitou** » July 1st, 2009, 11:37 am

2009-07-01, panel 4: "thinly veiled move critiques" -> "thinly veiled movie critiques".

(PoO is slipping. I would have thought he would have caught this one by now.)

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