2013-09-16: [CT] Mopiness

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2013-09-16: [CT] Mopiness

Postby The Comment Golem » September 16th, 2013, 12:00 am

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Re: 2013-09-16: [CT] Mopiness

Postby Graybeard » September 17th, 2013, 3:51 pm

The bangs look fine to me. A visual depiction of a story, whether in a webcomic or a visual novel or a newspaper strip, can get messages across with visual cues that aren't necessarily 100% accurate depictions of the subject. The flat bangs both fit and communicate Meji's frame of mind well.

Poe is sometimes inclined to be overly self-critical, I think. This isn't a bad trait for an artist/author to have.
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