2011-04-27: Backing Off

Follow the adventures of Rosencrantz and Guildenstern Fran and Naga in this all-new humorous entry to the growing Poeverse.
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2011-04-27: Backing Off

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Re: 2011-04-27: Backing Off

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God dammit. I sleep through two updates and there's already typos again.

*sigh* I'll fix them once Michael wakes up and gives me the files.

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Re: 2011-04-27: Backing Off

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Now you're making me look for typos, nothing really jumped out at me on my first read-through. Thing is, spoken language is often somewhat idiosyncratic so quite a few awkward constructions are reasonable.

Panel 3, the comma placement bothers me. I'd expect either "am I, like, the only" or "am I like the only"
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Re: 2011-04-27: Backing Off

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The elf is right. Main characters can't be killed! No one is going to read a comic about fancy McIronpants and his eternal woes. They'd all be out of work! Someone better throw someone at him before the bad touch.

(As for typos, I only spotted "what ever", and I had to look pretty hard.)
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Re: 2011-04-27: Backing Off

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Found more.

Capitalization or punctuation error on the alt text -- either the , should be a . or if shouldn't be capitalized.

Panel 2, doen't should be doesn't (and concur about 'what ever' -> 'whatever').
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