by Inquiring_m1nd » March 18th, 2011, 10:11 am
March 14th 2011
Panel 2: "We can take him back to the escape tunnels. It's where everyone we could find... IS hiding."
Panel 3:
Originally: " One engaged the attackers...and those things, all to cover the group, I was with, that were escorting people to the tunnels."
Possible edit: "One engaged the attackers...and those things, all to cover the group I was with, that was escorting people to the tunnels." Removes a comma and helps verb agreement. Still kinda awkward, though.