Panel 2: "We can take him back to the escape tunnels. It's where everyone we could find... IS hiding."
Panel 3:
Originally: " One engaged the attackers...and those things, all to cover the group, I was with, that were escorting people to the tunnels."
Possible edit: "One engaged the attackers...and those things, all to cover the group I was with, that was escorting people to the tunnels." Removes a comma and helps verb agreement. Still kinda awkward, though.
Panel two, Sarine's first speech bubble: "how ever" should be "however".
Panel two, Sarine's second speech bubble: "shouldn't of" should be "shouldn't have", or possibly "shouldn't've".
Panel two, Sarine's second speech bubble: Her sentence should end with some form of punctuation.
October 7th, 2011: Page title "Unstoppable Object/ Immovable Force" should be either "Unstoppable Object / Immovable Force" or "Unstoppable Object/Immovable Force". (Spaces go either on both sides of a slash or neither; never only on one).
-Forrest Cameranesi, Geek of All Trades
"I am Sam. Sam I am. I do not like trolls, flames, or spam."
6 October comic - "It's the scary little devil, isn't it?" - I think he's left out the word "girl." (May've been deliberate, I don't know; I simply point it out.)